Monday, October 6, 2008

when dreams get shattered !!!



She was happy because it was the most memorable day of her life. She was getting married and was very much eager to meet her significant other…. The happiness was observable all over on her face and her smile was the witness of her inner contentment.

Her eyes were constructing colorful pictures of her dream boy with whom she will be spending her entire life. A little thought of meeting her love, was bringing a smile on her face which was making her lips to move. Her smile after each pleasant thought of her sweetheart was producing sensation and was feeling her with plenty of exhilaration and excitement. With the every second passing off, her eagerness to meet her buddy was increasing greatly at much quicker pace. Everyone else in the house was busy in their preparations of welcoming the baraat. She was asked to sit in a corner. Dressed in red clothes with red sticks on her forehead, matching with the color of her red bangles, which were glittering and making a wonderful combination with her golden color bangles…she was looking like a fairy…she busied herself in the dreams of her loved one..........all of a sudden
She was awakened by her friends that her darling had come to take her along with him……hers lips started tilting, her eyes got filled with bounty of glee, her chicks were revealing the story of her joy to meet him . With a contented smile on her face, she got up to see him.........

And what she saw was …..a man with almost thrice of her age was standing with a garland in his hands…….her rosy cheeks got roofed by the lines of displeasure and extensive disappointment .Accepting it as her destiny she bended her neck in front of him, everyone expressed their joy by throwing flowers on them……..what people missed were her tears which were rolling down on her cheeks and then dripping the earth…were apparently dictating that a woman born in a poor family losses all her rights at the time of her birth!!

11 comments:

Aparna said...

that was really touching hemanth..
and intresting too..

cheers
aparna

Anwesa said...

just saw d same thing in a very popular tele-soap!its ridiculous n sad...

Hemanth Potluri said...

its very sad to read it preeti ..:(..

urs..hemu..

P.S:aparna rote my name here i dint get it y :O...little confused.

preetisoni said...

@aparna

welcome aparna

dear i am preeti and not hementh:)

anyways nice to see your comment!

@ANWESA

let me guess it balika vadhu?

@Hemanth Potluri

yeah that's why i am also confused!!:)

nice to see you...how u doing....not seeing u much online?

Ashish Soni said...

Very touchy....and thought provoking..

dEEPs said...

Nice post.. i liked the way u
glorifies bride and her feeling..
but a sad-ful ending..:(
liked ur flair writting also.


PS:-hope so ki ur next post dec/jan se pahle padhne ko mile..:P

ishqia said...

u have expressed it beautifully

eashan said...

cute doll..!!

bunty said...

wah sis macha di tune to.......

kya explain kiya hai,,,,,,,,,,



truly saying i hav nothng to comment on it..........

Hemanth Potluri said...

were are u re :)..missin u here...come bac soon..

urs..hemu..

ishqia said...

thanks for visiting my blog..